Vision: The angle of the shot COULD be better, but this angle is simply and awesome in that hides your face from view (adding a hint of mystery to your shot).
Originality: While the number of pictures of people holding weapons only goes up, the number of people utilizing the weapons well and uniquely (I see your AUG lacks a grip, which is something I love seeing, because the grips are so mainstream) is a number that ticks by in hours, whereas the number of shots in total go by in seconds.
Technique: What I love most about this picture, is that you're purposely hiding your face from the shot, most notably your eyes. This strips your self from the shot, instead of this being a picture of Czech, this could be anybody. Even the person looking at the shot. And once again, I love your gripless AUG.
Impact: The impact of the shot isn't the highest, but this in and of itself is a good thnig, as the point of camouflage is to try to not be seen.
Side note: I find it cool that the pattern of camo on your jacket matches that of the Mercs faction in BOII.
I go air-softing an I'm trying o find a good set of the camo you are wearing. It is German Flecktarn Camoflauge, standard camoflauge of the german army. I've been trying to find stuff that fits me, but to no avail.