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Fictional Firearm: HC-104 Assault Rifle by CzechBiohazard Fictional Firearm: HC-104 Assault Rifle by CzechBiohazard
Manufacturer: The Hoke Corp.

Type: Assault Rifle, Bullpup

Caliber: 5.56mm NATO (.223rem)
Action: Gas operated, rotating bolt
Magazines: 30 rounds
Rate of fire: 700 rounds per minute
Effective range of fire: 500 meters

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Concept, Design, & Artwork: :iconczechbiohazard:
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:iconrainbowsmash1998:
Looking at this gives me a nice 'post XM-8 feeling as an option for a standard issue firearm for the US army. But back to the critique.

Here's what I don't like. 3015 was right; it looks just like a TAR. I didn't even know what a TAR was until I did a google image search. I put this and the TAR in side-by-side windows, and they looked confuseable. But the good thing is, this is different enough that it could pass for a coincedence.

The very build of this gun is very realistic, and I think that it's one of the better assault rifles you've made in this fashion. I would, however, like it if you would continue to use the flag backgrounds. That's up to you though. I just think it's cool. Good job, I live in admiration of your weapons. And happy birthday.
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The Artist thought this was FAIR
10 out of 10 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconj-r-m-n-k-e:
Vision: The vision is great because the style you put as is awesome.
Originality: I can't not see any other design is similar with this idea and the style.
Technique: The technique is awesome because you use your own style.
Impact: The same thing as the technique and the background is great but ins't that great.

Anyway The design is awesome.
Peace out,
Joe Ronald Martin Nat-Khan English.
P.S. I hope this a fair critique not over the top.
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P.S.S. Sorry there are 1 is repeating it self because I tried to full up the word minimum up.
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4 out of 5 deviants thought this was fair.

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:iconturtlegirl112:
turtlegirl112 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
^^ I'd so love to fave all your designs... <3 I'll put this as my new desktop background.. :D
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. Well, you are more than welcome too if you want. :3
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:iconultimaweapon13:
UltimaWeapon13 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love the feel of this gun bro. It's one of those few guns (ever made) that has that complete and utter desire to hold it-just hold it and never let it go.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome, thanks. I love this design too. :3
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:iconlebadger0:
LeBadger0 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Cool one!
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! :3
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:iconshockwave9001:
Shockwave9001 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing. It's a perfect design.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :D
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:iconboby-boby:
Boby-Boby Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wouah ! *o*

Mh... Is it heavy ?
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No, the majority of the body is made out of polymer, so it's only about 8 lbs.

:iconhappy-zeroplz:
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:iconboby-boby:
Boby-Boby Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
8 lbs ? x'D omg !
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is that to heavy for you? :P
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:iconboby-boby:
Boby-Boby Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No no, it's perfect ! x'D
Hey, I can wear a motor of 440 lbs with my father. =p
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, alrighty. :D
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:iconboby-boby:
Boby-Boby Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
=p
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:iconlavey1917:
Lavey1917 Featured By Owner May 5, 2012
beautyful bullpub
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! :D
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:iconlavey1917:
Lavey1917 Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
no problem
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:iconcrazyronn:
CrazyRonn Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
one word question...
ambidextrous? xD
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not at all...... ;)
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:iconcrazyronn:
CrazyRonn Featured By Owner May 4, 2012
haha ahh the british approach... if youre not a righty, you get brass!
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Exactly! It's funny though, because I'm actually left-handed. But, I shoot right-handed...... :P
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:iconcrazyronn:
CrazyRonn Featured By Owner May 5, 2012
i guess if you train righty youll do alright
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:iconkatie-jane8:
Katie-Jane8 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
Nice work, the detail is great :)
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :D
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:iconkatie-jane8:
Katie-Jane8 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
Welcome! ^^
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:iconpaz0ok:
paz0ok Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Love it <3
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :D
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:iconmetolguy:
MetolGuy Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
Very convincingly designed bullpup.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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:icon3015:
3015 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
lol not mutch Fictional...it is TAR-21 ^.^
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm confused.
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:icon3015:
3015 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
lol that rifle reminds me TAR-21
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, alrighty.
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:iconrainbowsmash1998:
Rainbowsmash1998 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
It's true, its shaped like a TAR. That's the only thing that would keep me from critiqueing it, but I'll do it anyway because no one else is.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh alrighty. Thanks for the critique. :D
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:iconjackzombiehunter:
jackzombiehunter Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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:iconchrislmgt1:
ChrisLMGT1 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
Now that's what I call, compact!
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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:iconth3-y0ung-0n3s:
th3-y0ung-0n3s Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2011
very nice, kinda thin and flimsy looking but nice nevertheless
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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:iconspillnerlol:
SpillnerLoL Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011
I like it :).
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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:iconmobius-118:
mobius-118 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice gun.
and background
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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:iconrxl-noir:
Rxl-Noir Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
Very nice work, dude.
Just curious, where's the charging handle? Is it in the other side?
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. Yes, the charging handle is on the other side.
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:iconmaraxxuseredexa:
MaraxxusEredexa Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sure is amazing in here. :)
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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