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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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But, the layout doesn't feel that original, almost like a G36 rigged into a bullpup. Not that that's bad, mind you. G36 platform rifles are some of my favorite guns, and you did a very good job with this. It doesn't look like someone hacked together a G36 bullpup with photoshop, but it still seems G36-esq
but here are some things I think you could improve:
>Loose the muzzle brake. a 5.56 won't kick hard enough to need one.
>add 1913 (AKA picitany) rails for bolting on tacticool goodies.
>raise the charging handle a bit. Right now it looks like it will get in the way of the charging handle or gas system.
>Add some back-up iron sights ti the tip top of the carry handle.
>Finally, if this weapon ejects spent casings to the side, you should think about having an alternate ejecting port on the left side.
The Steyr AUG and FAMAS (and I think the TAR 21) all have one.
If the bolt is removed and certian parts moved around the rifle becomes a left-ejecting weapon. (thus, making it possible for left-handed shooters to use it without taking hot brass to the face.)
Of course, the above point it moot if the weapon ejects casings downwards (like a P90) or forwards (like an F2000)
Hope this helps.
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