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Fictional Firearm: HC-AR107C Compact Assault Rifle by CzechBiohazard Fictional Firearm: HC-AR107C Compact Assault Rifle by CzechBiohazard
Manufacturer: The Hoke Corporation

Country of Origin: USA

Type: Compact Assault Rifle, Carbine, PDW

Caliber: .223 Rem
Magazine Capacity: 32 rounds
Rate of Fire: 900 RPM

Concept, Design, & Artwork: :iconczechbiohazard:
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:iconrainbowsmash1998:
Fascinating... Now a lot of this particular critique will come from a rather personal point of view. Meaning that everything I say is wrong will come from the specific way I would try and use this gun if I just randomly picked it up in a gunfight or at a range.

Everything on the top half of the gun is fine, in my opinion. Or maybe the top 2/3. Now this APPEARS to me to be a well-made transfusion of the p90 and the F2000, in real life relatives of design. One of the greatest things about the F2000 is the placement of the ejection port on the front of the gun. That way lefties wouldn't get brass in the face. That's not the case here. SO, this gun isn't exactly ambidextrous.

The other thing I don't like are the handle. And I know, it's P90 style, but still, it looks too short to me.

The texturing is fantastic though, and it's a pretty good transfusion of certain elements in real life guns. Keep up the good work.
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:iconmrjkapowey:
Okay, I really like this gun from an artistic point of view: the texturing is really nice, just the right amount of weathering to look cool without going into lolfail levels. On to the more technical side, and this is just as good...

First thing is the fire selector, it's both good and bad, regretfully. You've put safety and repetition at opposite ends of the fire selector, something that is good for if the fire selector is easy to move between modes. (This being because, unlike in most games and films, semi-auto/repetition is used in almost every situation by the modern infantryman) On the other hand, the fire selector looks pretty hard to manipulate, quite small and fiddly (remember: your weapon may need to be used by someone 1/2 way up a mountain, wearing thick gloves and at night - make it easy for as many situations as possible), however this is a small point. The rails and iron sights are good (G36 RIS and G36 Irons), I like the brass deflector too (often forgotten by people) and the ambidextrous G36-style cocking handle is good, if slightly weighty. (since that section is very much based on the G36 I'm assuming the cocking handle works on the same principle. Therefore it's a massive lump of metal which is heading all the way back to the bolt, much further than the G36's would need to go). Finally, I'll quickly address the magazine. I know RoninPsycho's said it, but that's gotta be a 'x45' magazine, so you could probably claim that it's firing the 9x39mm subsonic round used by the Soviets/Russians in the AS and VSS rifles.

But, despite any niggles, it's a good gun!
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:iconstealth47:
Stealth47 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Fn2000 short muzzle for me :D
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:iconbrotspinne1:
Brotspinne1 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014
FN P90 from Belgium
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is that so? Tell me how is this the FN P90?

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:iconwangsty:
wangsty Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Professional Writer
how manu bullets go in the clip? This gun is from COD!
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
32 rounds. Also, it's called a magazine, you moron. Lies! It's from Battlefield 3!
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:iconwangsty:
wangsty Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Professional Writer
I'm a master firearm master you would be wise to head my advice


but I wouldn't expect too much, i guess.


I could totally make a cooler gun in MS Paint bro COME AT ME
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sadly, you are just an idiot. This gun isn't from COD.

Good for you, go do it.
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:iconperrythehedgehog:
perrythehedgehog Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
What he means is that it bears a VERY small resemblance to the PDW-57 from Black Ops II. But, apart from the foregrip, it looks nothing like it. It's more of a G36/F2000 hybrid with...interesting results. I like it.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
All guns have a small resemblance to each other. I'm just tired all of the idiots that keep on comparing guns to each other when then are completely wrong. I based a weapon off of the FAMAS and he told me I drew the Tar-21. That shit just gets irritating as fuck. He said I stole the Tar-21's design completely, because it's a bullpup. lol

However, thanks. lol :3
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:iconperrythehedgehog:
perrythehedgehog Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
Yeah, those buggers who think they know everything. You're welcome, though. :D
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:iconthe-strify:
The-Strify Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Your combined an F2000 with a G36...for that, you are awesome.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconpixelbound:
PixelBound Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool gun, looks gay lawl jk, still cool tho
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3 Oh my, well it is very gay. :3
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:iconturtlegirl112:
turtlegirl112 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
<3 LOVE <3
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconwildergothica:
WilderGothica Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Something like that looks too heavy to hold.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Just like my ***is. :3

Well, the body of the weapon is made out of a polymer plastic, so it wouldn't be that heavy. Maybe around 8 pounds? It's more or less the size and weight of the FN P90. But, I don't have that weapon to show you. However, I do have an airsoft Steyr AUG that you could hold? The real deal would only weigh a little bit more.
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:iconwildergothica:
WilderGothica Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:shocked:
You'd have to show me!
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wait, which one? My penis or my Steyr AUG?
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:iconwildergothica:
WilderGothica Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Gun.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh..... :sadface:
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:iconsmithiii:
Smithiii Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Nice. :D
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconsoap971:
Soap971 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Magpul PDR-C reference?
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Actually, I didn't think about that until you said something. It wasn't referenced by that weapon, but they do look similar. My references were: HK G36c, FN P90, and the FN 2000
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:iconsoap971:
Soap971 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, it really have that FN feel, but it really looks like a heavier PDR. :3
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, I see. Indeed.
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:iconcommander-fillmore:
Commander-Fillmore Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
thats different dude
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! :3
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:iconcommander-fillmore:
Commander-Fillmore Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
your welcome
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:icondastig177:
daStig177 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Definite favorite, although that mag looks like it would accept a 5.56 round not a .45 ACP round.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. Yeah, I messed up on the design for the magazine. :P
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:iconhaydenm14:
haydenm14 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
That is awesome! :D
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! :3
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:iconhaydenm14:
haydenm14 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
You're welcome ^.^
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:iconlavey1917:
Lavey1917 Featured By Owner May 5, 2012
the pretty son of the P90 and the F2000
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:iconlord-dracodraconis:
Lord-DracoDraconis Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dont forget the g36 parts!
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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:iconlavey1917:
Lavey1917 Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
no problem
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:iconcanadian-weapon338:
canadian-weapon338 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
food for thought.... resize the tigger but other then that i like it
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Alrighty, thanks. :D
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:iconcanadian-weapon338:
canadian-weapon338 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob
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:iconbrutechieftan:
Brutechieftan Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Student General Artist
looks like the new nerf Rayven.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool.
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:iconbrutechieftan:
Brutechieftan Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student General Artist
yup
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:iconroninpsycho:
RoninPsycho Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm...looks like it's based on the FN F2000. ^_^ If it only uses 9mm rounds, though, why is the magazine so wide? It looks like it would use a rifle caliber, like the 5.56 or something.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When, I was planning on making this as a submachine gun, but I guess I didn't realize that the magazine was to wide. I guess, I just overlooked it. Silly me. :P
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:iconroninpsycho:
RoninPsycho Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, ok. ^^;
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:iconwaffletoes:
waffletoes Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student Artist
photoshop?
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