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Fictional Firearm: HC-AR204c [Krieg] Assault Rifle by CzechBiohazard Fictional Firearm: HC-AR204c [Krieg] Assault Rifle by CzechBiohazard
Nickname: Krieg

Manufacturer: The Hoke Corporation

Country of Origin: United States of America

Type: Assault Rifle, Bullpup

Caliber: .204 Ruger
Magazine capacity: 30 rounds standard
Operation: Gas operated, Fully-Automatic
Rate of fire: 950 rounds per minute
Effective Range: 650 meters
Weight: 5.4 lbs

Concept, Design, & Artwork: :iconczechbiohazard:
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:iconrainbowsmash1998:
I like critiquing, in case you haven't noticed. This is an excellent gun on virtually all counts. Bullpup assault rifles often come out unrealistically (if you look at my gallery there are none thusfar) so I admire your ability to put so many good looking bullpup weapons across. However, I'm forced to assume a few things for this one to be perfect. A: The fire selector is ambidextrious, and really meant for thumb operation. Otherwise, if the fire selector is intended for the index finger, then "safe" should be on the bottom. Also, full-auto should come directly after safe, and single fire after that. Thus is the nature of modern assault rifles and sub-machineguns. The only other thing I assume is that I hope the ejection port isn't that grey rectangle above the magazine housing.

Other than all that, (I know my critique sounds a bit negative) This is truly an excellent looking gun.
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:iconblitzjaeger:
Ive been saving your works to critique all in one sitting, so here we go...short and sweet.

-I dont liike the ejector port, its in a good spot, but the odd details on it make it look blocked?

- That holo sight is a flat out 99.9% perfect replica of the real one, we both know this because I bet you have one, and I do. Other than having the main adjuster wheel on our viewing side (the right) its nearly identical...which is fine but seems kinda lazy, at least make it a LITTLE unique, unless the whole idea WAS to copy it? (Usually your guns are more futuristic so I doubt this is the case.)

- I feel like safe should be at the bottom...just my thoughts on it. Also, Im tired of every gun you do having the white and red colors for the selection. Not EVERY make has color there you know? (Yes you do.) I realize though that you mostly make guns from one manufacture (HOKE) so I guess your forgiven...lol

-A minor thing just a preference really, I like bullpups with straight mags to feed perpendicular to the ground, like this T if your going to make a curve, might as well use curved/banana mags. Just because they both go with the design look better IMO.

- Trigger looks like its in half mode sorta like on double action guns...looks so close to firing...but again, opinion!

- Too much gray and black up front, itt looks nearly seperate from the rest which is all camo, I dont like the way it seems cut in half, Id use less gray/black and more camo up front. Also, why is the railing and upper housing floating above the rest of the rifle, is that on purpose?

- Where are the iron sights?

- Why are the rails so mismatched at the front and back?

- Do I have anything positive coming? =) Yes OFC!

- Nice muzzle brake. Simple and clean, I like the uncomplicated ones, not those that look like a piece from my Ninja Blender.

- Looks positively wonderful to shoot, the ergonomics are great and look well designed and shooter friendly.

- I like those primary and fore grip shapes, good ergos. Indention on D-Bar is nice touch and realisticly useful.

- Looks like a solid gun and decent design.

- Bullpups FTW every day of the week.

- Would like to see same but recolored...
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:iconshockwave9001:
Shockwave9001 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it :D
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconshockwave9001:
Shockwave9001 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome buddy :3
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:iconarthuro12:
arthuro12 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Digging the camo.. and the AK74 style compensator!
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconwalkinglegend:
walkinglegend Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
do you use these for anything because i would really like these to be featured in my comic book especially this one all credit goes to you if they are featured in the comic book
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sure, just give me credit. :3
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:iconwalkinglegend:
walkinglegend Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
yep
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:iconcapt-exce77ence:
Capt-Exce77ence Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
looks like a mix between the M-TAR 21, F2000, and AUG
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconcycrone:
Cycrone Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
pretty cool gun, you should make it in quarter view so that people have a better perception of how it really looks like.(more on the thickness)
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. I might do that in the future. Thanks for the suggestion. :D
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:iconj-aimless:
J-Aimless Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i loves me some bullpup! this is kinda cool lookin
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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:iconswordsdragon:
Swordsdragon Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
Great!
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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:iconspillnerlol:
SpillnerLoL Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
Looks great! Love dat EOTECH BRAH!
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks buddy.
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:iconspillnerlol:
SpillnerLoL Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012
Welcome!
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:iconrotaken:
Rotaken Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
HC... means hardcore?
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The Hoke Corporation. Although it is hardcore! :D
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:icontheendofpain:
TheEndOfPain Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
if this had a civilian version, I'd propably get one
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool, thanks.
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:iconwikipediauser:
WIKIPEDIAUSER Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Nice Future Weapons For Future Games


Rating::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star:
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! :D
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:iconwikipediauser:
WIKIPEDIAUSER Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your Welcome I Hope NAMCO Know story about Time crisis 5 Story & Your Drawing about weapon:D
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:iconmiha9000:
miha9000 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
added to Sketches and concepts in Sci-fi Archives
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:iconjablar:
jablar Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice work,
but why are you using the Czech flag as a bacground, that gun is made in USA, right?
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. Well, I'm American, so I do as I please. I'm part Czech, that's why I use it as a background. Also, I was born in America, hence it was made in America. This is the American way of thinking. :D
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:iconjablar:
jablar Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hm, I donīt care ... this is the Czech way of thinking... :)

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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well you did ask.... :P
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:iconskorpion66:
Skorpion66 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Student Interface Designer
That's pretty awesome and all... But why did you stop drawing? :noes:
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. Well, I didn't stop drawing. All my lines are drawn by hand. :P
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:iconskorpion66:
Skorpion66 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Student Interface Designer
You know what I mean. :P
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I dunno really. I just prefer digital myself.
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:iconsponge1310:
Sponge1310 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty, looks somewhat like the FN Herstal F2000 =)
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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