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Fictional Firearm: HC-BAR36c [German Fish] by CzechBiohazard Fictional Firearm: HC-BAR36c [German Fish] by CzechBiohazard
Manufacturer: The Hoke Corporation

Country of Origin: USA

Type: Assault Rifle, Bullpup

Caliber: 5.56x45 NATO
Action: Gas operated, rotating bolt
Overall length: 780 mm
Barrel length: 518 mm
Weight: 4.13 kg
Magazine capacity: 32 rounds
Rate of fire: 750 rounds per minute
Effective range: about 500 meters

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Critique by Borkless May 27, 2012, 5:01:37 PM
Looks good, your drawing is very nice and clean, but it still looks very realistic and grimy.

But, the layout doesn't feel that original, almost like a G36 rigged into a bullpup. Not that that's bad, mind you. G36 platform rifles are some of my favorite guns, and you did a very good job with this. It doesn't look like someone hacked together a G36 bullpup with photoshop, but it still seems G36-esq

but here are some things I think you could improve:

>Loose the muzzle brake. a 5.56 won't kick hard enough to need one.

>add 1913 (AKA picitany) rails for bolting on tacticool goodies.

>raise the charging handle a bit. Right now it looks like it will get in the way of the charging handle or gas system.

>Add some back-up iron sights ti the tip top of the carry handle.

>Finally, if this weapon ejects spent casings to the side, you should think about having an alternate ejecting port on the left side.

The Steyr AUG and FAMAS (and I think the TAR 21) all have one.

If the bolt is removed and certian parts moved around the rifle becomes a left-ejecting weapon. (thus, making it possible for left-handed shooters to use it without taking hot brass to the face.)

Of course, the above point it moot if the weapon ejects casings downwards (like a P90) or forwards (like an F2000)

Hope this helps.
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NightwingFan0497 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Nice.
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543Bs0Za Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
how u do that camo stuff?
photosohp?
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Paint.Net + Blend mode?
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Siberiia Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Kind of looks like a G36 o:
But then again, I think it's suppose to?
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Indeed, it's supposed to be a bullpup version of the G36.
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Siberiia Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thought so :P
Amazing design
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CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks again. :3
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Shockwave9001 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Some damn nice lines, brother.

What programs do you use to build your weapons by the way? I have no idea.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3

I use Paint.Net and Photoshop CS5.
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Shockwave9001 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can't even begin to imagine how you do that.
Could you perhaps post a compilation of works in progress as they advance? I'd love to see something like that!
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