Fictional Firearm: HC-BAR36c [German Fish]

Looks good, your drawing is very nice and clean, but it still looks very realistic and grimy.

But, the layout doesn't feel that original, almost like a G36 rigged into a bullpup. Not that that's bad, mind you. G36 platform rifles are some of my favorite guns, and you did a very good job with this. It doesn't look like someone hacked together a G36 bullpup with photoshop, but it still seems G36-esq

but here are some things I think you could improve:

>Loose the muzzle brake. a 5.56 won't kick hard enough to need one.

>add 1913 (AKA picitany) rails for bolting on tacticool goodies.

>raise the charging handle a bit. Right now it looks like it will get in the way of the charging handle or gas system.

>Add some back-up iron sights ti the tip top of the carry handle.

>Finally, if this weapon ejects spent casings to the side, you should think about having an alternate ejecting port on the left side.

The Steyr AUG and FAMAS (and I think the TAR 21) all have one.

If the bolt is removed and certian parts moved around the rifle becomes a left-ejecting weapon. (thus, making it possible for left-handed shooters to use it without taking hot brass to the face.)

Of course, the above point it moot if the weapon ejects casings downwards (like a P90) or forwards (like an F2000)

Hope this helps.