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Fictional Firearm: HC-SG88C Submachine Gun by CzechBiohazard Fictional Firearm: HC-SG88C Submachine Gun by CzechBiohazard
Nikename: Scorpio

Manufacturer: The Hoke Corporation

Country of Origin: USA

Type: Submachine Gun

Caliber: .30 Carbine
Action: Gas operated, rotating bolt
Magazine capacity: 24 rounds
Rate of fire: 900 rounds per minute

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Concept/Design/Artwork by: :iconczechbiohazard:
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Vision - I went with the average 3 stars because there's just not a whole llot of potential for weapon design overall. Its not really your fault, its just the nature of the subject. Everyone knows there's going to be a handle, a trigger, ammo source, barrel, etc. You can only push vision so far in that sense. Your guns are mostly modern to somewhat future-modern looking, so that's where I'm getting my 3 stars from.

Originality - The design is nice overall, I gave 3.5 here because its quite similar to your other designs. Not a bad thing, you've definitely got your own style and look going for you, which is a positive. But at a certain point (especially for the long time watchers) a lot of the designs start to seem similar, or sort of reminiscent of one another. I will say I like the more plain look over the camo'd out Call of Duty looking versions you used to do. Those can be fun but for me, many of your camo patterns were distracting and ruined the designs IMO.

Technique - I went with 3 stars because theres not a wholee lot of effects going on, its a rpetty basic and straight forward painting. As well it should be though, too much and you lose the focus of the weapon. I think you have just the right amount going on, scratches, shadow, nice background thats not too busy. Overall a well done piece, if not overly technical.

Impact - 4 Stars for overall feel. Nice and simple and clean, not too busy not too plain. (I loathe those pencil on paper weapon looks - albeit thats how ALL of mine start too) Youve got a good look to your work and it is pretty believable. My only REAL complaint, and its more of a pet peeve: I prefer guns to face left to right. Lol Well done sir. =)
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Artmarcus Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
a hammer and a cicle
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm a Communist. lol :3
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HeadHunter2954 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
If Vladof (Borderlands) made a submachine gun, it would look like this. Great work.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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Shockwave9001 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh this is really nice.
The high lighted areas and the darker lighted areas throw me a bit off though.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. In all honestly, I'm still trying to learn to render lighting properly. ><
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FFDP-Korpiklaaniguy Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
I love the design
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconffdp-korpiklaaniguy:
FFDP-Korpiklaaniguy Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
No problem
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Brettenator Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
If there was a weapon I had to use in a Zombie Apocalypse, It would be this one:)
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