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Fictional Firearm: HC-SG88C Submachine Gun by CzechBiohazard Fictional Firearm: HC-SG88C Submachine Gun by CzechBiohazard
Nikename: Scorpio

Manufacturer: The Hoke Corporation

Country of Origin: USA

Type: Submachine Gun

Caliber: .30 Carbine
Action: Gas operated, rotating bolt
Magazine capacity: 24 rounds
Rate of fire: 900 rounds per minute

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Concept/Design/Artwork by: :iconczechbiohazard:
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:iconblitzjaeger:
Vision - I went with the average 3 stars because there's just not a whole llot of potential for weapon design overall. Its not really your fault, its just the nature of the subject. Everyone knows there's going to be a handle, a trigger, ammo source, barrel, etc. You can only push vision so far in that sense. Your guns are mostly modern to somewhat future-modern looking, so that's where I'm getting my 3 stars from.

Originality - The design is nice overall, I gave 3.5 here because its quite similar to your other designs. Not a bad thing, you've definitely got your own style and look going for you, which is a positive. But at a certain point (especially for the long time watchers) a lot of the designs start to seem similar, or sort of reminiscent of one another. I will say I like the more plain look over the camo'd out Call of Duty looking versions you used to do. Those can be fun but for me, many of your camo patterns were distracting and ruined the designs IMO.

Technique - I went with 3 stars because theres not a wholee lot of effects going on, its a rpetty basic and straight forward painting. As well it should be though, too much and you lose the focus of the weapon. I think you have just the right amount going on, scratches, shadow, nice background thats not too busy. Overall a well done piece, if not overly technical.

Impact - 4 Stars for overall feel. Nice and simple and clean, not too busy not too plain. (I loathe those pencil on paper weapon looks - albeit thats how ALL of mine start too) Youve got a good look to your work and it is pretty believable. My only REAL complaint, and its more of a pet peeve: I prefer guns to face left to right. Lol Well done sir. =)
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:iconartmarcus:
Artmarcus Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
a hammer and a cicle
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm a Communist. lol :3
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:iconheadhunter2954:
HeadHunter2954 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
If Vladof (Borderlands) made a submachine gun, it would look like this. Great work.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconshockwave9001:
Shockwave9001 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh this is really nice.
The high lighted areas and the darker lighted areas throw me a bit off though.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. In all honestly, I'm still trying to learn to render lighting properly. ><
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:iconffdp-neko:
FFDP-Neko Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
I love the design
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconffdp-neko:
FFDP-Neko Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
No problem
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:iconbrettenator:
Brettenator Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
If there was a weapon I had to use in a Zombie Apocalypse, It would be this one:)
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconprokhorvlg:
prokhorvlg Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really need to see a version of the stock extended... I might even use the shape if I build again, it looks really good!
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmmmmm, I might do just a sketched version.

Thanks. :3
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:iconsharpphotostudio:
SharpPhotoStudio Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Professional Photographer
This looks like a cross between the Skorpion and the MSMC. Really interesting concept and design.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconnikitatarsov:
NikitaTarsov Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Nice design, i really like the front of it.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconultimaweapon13:
UltimaWeapon13 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's pretty good, kind reminds me of a Skorpion Evo III/MP5k blend.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3 So no G36c in that mix? :3
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:iconultimaweapon13:
UltimaWeapon13 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Meh, to be honest the entire G36 family are just different lengths, in my opinion.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, I know. But, just think of this gun as the G36c as the size of the Mp5k. Or something along those lines.
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:iconultimaweapon13:
UltimaWeapon13 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can see that. It's pretty cool.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconejt-710:
EJT-710 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Resembles a Skorpion Evo 3
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconx-silent-night-x:
x-Silent-Night-x Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This gun is cool. I do disagree with the critique article in the fact that this gun has a lot of potential. I would actually have fun with this one
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. I thought the gun as some type of G36 Mp5 hybrid. I love the look, however, I think I could change the pistol grip, but I'm not sure what would fit.
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:iconx-silent-night-x:
x-Silent-Night-x Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the grip. However I need the dementions of the gun to rework it. If I have ur permission
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
To rework it? It's suppose to be the same size as the Mp5k.
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:iconx-silent-night-x:
x-Silent-Night-x Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sure, go ahead. :3
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:iconx-silent-night-x:
x-Silent-Night-x Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OK I'll let u know when its done
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
K, cool. :3
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:iconzero-z66:
Zero-Z66 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
Looks and sounds like a good Personal Defense Weapon for protection teams and special forces. Any chance you'll come up a sidearm to compliment it?
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3 Hmmmm, I may.
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:iconandrewbig:
andrewbig Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
Nice :) Keep up the good work ;)
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :3
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:iconscrewfaceromeo:
ScrewfaceRomeo Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Mag seems off. .45 ACP doesn't taper like 9mm Pansy, so you won't get a "banana" magazine. Also seems too wide for the .45 ACP cartridge.
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:iconvernon682:
Vernon682 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
Wouldn't it be a compact carbine then? Or just call it an SMG for simplicity's sake?
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:iconscrewfaceromeo:
ScrewfaceRomeo Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
SMG refers to pistol caliber weapons. .30 Carbine is a rifle cartridge, albeit a very anemic one.
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:iconvernon682:
Vernon682 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
I know, but its already called an smg. Why change every thing from smg to assault rifle?
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:iconscrewfaceromeo:
ScrewfaceRomeo Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, for one, because SMGs have been made obsolete by ARs. 
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmmmm, so what caliber do you think would fit?
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:iconscrewfaceromeo:
ScrewfaceRomeo Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks like a .30 Carbine magazine to me.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, yeah. I think that caliber fits it well. Thanks. :3
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:iconskorpion66:
Skorpion66 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Student Interface Designer
PURGE THE UNCLEAN.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hopefully that excludes those dirty female whores. I will purge them with something else. :3
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:iconskorpion66:
Skorpion66 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Student Interface Designer
Sorry, all must be purged.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, I'm into necro...... so it's not a total loss. :3
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:icontorvus:
Torvus Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
Where do the shells eject?
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